Nicely done!

Two suggestions:

1. Title:  Add "Status" to yield "Status Report of the SIGCSE
Committee".  The text indicate this is a work in progress, but readers
scanning the program might think this is a final product.

2. In the time allocation, add "session participants" to the Small-group
segment to yield "Small-Group Discussion (45 minutes, Session attendees
& Committee leaders)"

This addition will make it clear that the small groups are to include
all in discussion and brainstorming, not just leaders.

Henry



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On 8/25/16 1:17 PM, Douglas Baldwin wrote:
> Here is one more look at the liberal arts committee special session
> proposal for anyone who wants it. Many of you made suggestions, and I've
> incorporated most of them as small changes here and there in the text.
> (The one suggestion least incorporated was the very good observation
> that "Report of...." is not the most exciting way to start a title, yet
> I think SIGCSE program committees generally try hard to give special
> sessions to committees wanting to report, so I wanted it to be
> abundantly clear that this is such a report -- I changed the title to
> put the more exciting words first, but the title still says this is a
> SIGCSE committee report later.)
> 
> If anyone sees things that need changing in the next day, please let me
> know. Otherwise I'll submit this pretty much as-is. Thanks!
> 
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